L.I.- we are learning to write a recount using correct punctuation .
Success Criteria: I know I can do this when I write a recount about Duffy theatre show using correct punctuation.
Duffy theatre
They are amazing actors!
Today our school was lucky to have a Duffy show to entertain us.
First they introduced themselves. Their names are Sunny, Rosie and Temata , then we sang the Duffy song.
I like their unique clothing. I also like the way they acted and made it look like they were the real characters.
The story was about Temata travelling through time to save Ruby's dad from being killed in the war.
I like the way they pretended to do slow motion when Temata saved Sunny from the war. Temata pulled Sunny from the gun shot and when he was about to go, he got shot on the arm ,but he was okay. It was really funny when Temata saw Ruby as a baby.
Then we sang the Duffy song again when the show was finished.
Finally we went back to our classes.
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