Learning Intention: We are learning to develop understanding of the topic using research skills.
Success Criteria: I know I can do this when I research and find six attractions in Rotorua.
Hi there, my name is Lily and I am a student in Te Waka Ako at Waikowhai Primary School. I really like the way you have written the name of the place you liked in Rotorua and then added more details to hook them into your writing. It made me think of when I went to Rotorua and went to go see most of these places. Have you thought about adding a little more detail like a description instead of just 2 sentences. If you would like to see my learning, my blog is http://WpsLilyw. Blogspot.co.nz. Blog you later! Lily
Hi there, my name is Lily and I am a student in Te Waka Ako at Waikowhai Primary School. I really like the way you have written the name of the place you liked in Rotorua and then added more details to hook them into your writing. It made me think of when I went to Rotorua and went to go see most of these places.
ReplyDeleteHave you thought about adding a little more detail like a description instead of just 2 sentences. If you would like to see my learning, my blog is http://WpsLilyw. Blogspot.co.nz.
Blog you later!
Lily
Thank you Lily.
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